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Since this is an animation from 2016, this might explain why the quality isn't as good as it should be. With that in mind, I'll assume you've improved your work.

The positive points of this are that the main character designs are super creative and the story and gags are funny. In spite of that, the animation as well as the overall needs a lot of work. Regarding the former, you didn't use a good amount of hand drawn frames for some actions, while depending too heavily on basic motion tweens for other actions. As for the latter problem, your artwork looks like a bunch of scribbles with the paint brush tool hastily filled in with the paint bucket. Plus, the color palette is way too much. If you tidied it up without sacrificing the visual style you're attempting to portray, then you might have an appealing animation on your hands.

If you created new animations in recent years, then I'd love to view them and judge your progress.

MatyBoy-Toons responds:

Thank you for your honest opinion, I needed that.

I am still learning and improving a lot, and I really like doing animated projects. I want to do more projects and thus improve a lot.

This is quite cute and rather wholesome to a degree! Also, the animation's not bad! I'm looking forward to when you create your next animation and see if you'll improve from there!

Twoeliz responds:

Thank you so much for such thoughtful comment! I been doing an animation each month but I think that's about to change. You see I am thinking of starting a series soon, since I'm the only one working on it I want to start it as soon as possible so I can finish it before I die or something Haha. Sadly I don't think my animations will improve too much as if I'm working on that project I might not go the extra mile for great animation as I'm just trying to show a story. This does not mean that the animation for the series will be trash by any means but is important to keep in mind. I hope to see you around again!

It's simple, yet not bad. Definitely worth a chuckle!

Next time, unless that's your visual style, maybe apply more frames and character movements?

Dan responds:

Thanks! It was more of a low quality shitpost imo, my stuff in the future will have more animation than this slideshow lol

It's a clever idea to take the Mass Attack Kirbies and repurpose them as Adeleine's "children." It's also nicely animated.

Say, will you give those two Kirbies a Maxim Tomato? Sometimes, the ones who love you the most hurt you the most, even physically.

KimiOmega responds:

Cheers, mate!
The 2 who were stepped on do deserve a snack, yeah.

I'm a tightly wound animator, but as long as I have good friends, I have a better time managing my life. Just ask if you need anything!

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