E-ManAnimates's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[How ya doin steven?]

This is alright. I was hoping for a little more animation, but it's a nice enough video.

By the way, I haven't spoke with you much on here as of late because I'm thinking that Newgrounds isn't exactly the place for me anymore. I'm actually a bit more active on YouTube, Twitter, and Discord.

Tyro1301 responds:

It's okay! I'm a little more active on Youtube as well.

[Sublo & Tangy Mustard #12 - Sublo's Sandwich]

Seems like another version of Regular Show to me, which is a good thing! In spite of needing just a tiny bit more frames, the animation looks really good! Also, I'm a sucker for the parrot costume!

[Little Tricks]

Isn't this the exact same video you uploaded to Newgrounds a few days ago? I'm sure the staff removed it for a reason, so it is wise to not reupload the unedited video onto here. That's why sites like YouTube exist.

I will state that the visuals are still intriguing, but that's all it has going for it.

[Fat guy 2019]

Well, I'll admit that the animation of the fat man falling over was pretty good. Then, everything else in the video stopped making sense after the archer. You have potential, but it's up to you to fully realize it through more ambitious animations. Also, adding some sound effects and improving the way you draw a bit wouldn't hurt.

AlphyArts responds:

I feel like I've improved on my style since then. and also have improved on the animation. I also made this in a very limited program at school at the time. thank u for the encouraging feedback, means alot :3 also sorry for not replying for years. I only just discovered how to reply to comments :D

[Orange Trick]

While there is a lack of animation, the animation that is there is actually good!

By the way, what has that child done to warrant that gentleman to pull such a dirty trick?

[Fury vs Wilder]

Well, I will say that the animation is alright. I see that you are trying to push the boundaries of tween/modular animation, but you can do better! Maybe add just a little more weight to the actions and not make the characters look quite as stiff. Also, some additional sound effects would spice this up!

kgmbsh responds:

Really trying to close the gab but dont feel like it can reach the quality of FBF

[The Conductor.]

The art styles are a bit all over the place, but it's almost endearing in a way. I like how the conductor looks a bit like a Dr. Seuss character. Also, I like the humor in this, especially how nuts the conductor is.

What surprised me the most about this, however, is how it's animated. Just add more frames between the actions and you have what it takes to be one of the best animators on this site! In other words, I like what I see!

[Minecraft Server Update]

You know, there's a bit of truth in this that got a chuckle out of me.

Anyway, I'm a bit impressed that you animated the character rotating in that office chair. Also, as far as tween/modular animation goes, this is not bad. Still, I think you can improve this kind of animation. Try having him move subtly (i.e. breathing) when he's more or less still and apply anticipation to his actions. Even something like a slight lift of the arm needs to have it lightly nudge slightly in the opposite direction prior to the intended action. Also, have you considered applying a little more weight to your animation?

[Fenrir Art Short 1]

I already left a similar piece of critique on your second video, but I'll recap it here. Basically, you may have good art, but slideshows are not all that welcome on this website. Also, the music is both unremarkable and a bit grating.

FenrirArtGEM responds:

I am doing things differently since you did not come up with idea and ways to complete things as best as you can. It is a art-movie, not what the stupid media sold you through lies and hypocrisy. It is okay anyway. I am glad I worked on this. This is a short, not something big. Thanks though for your critique.

[Fenrir Art Short 2]

As nice as the artwork is, this is mostly a slideshow. It makes me wonder why you haven't animated the whole thing like your closing logo, which is at least decent animation. Also, there is a lack of sound and music, and the music that is there is both a bit unremarkable and grating. I apologize for the harsh review.

FenrirArtGEM responds:

This is not a slideshow. This is a art-movie. It does not need to be what media sold to you through lies and control. I know music is not best and it did not have to be. If you want something that lies to you and makes you feel safer than a armadillo, go watch a Disney movie. But, thanks for the critique. Whoever you are, you are not me and will NEVER know how hard it really is to make your own thing.